Friday, January 11, 2008

Rain, Streaming Down Comments

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Rain-slick roads, black and gleaming
Drops on the windowpanes, streaming
It seems even the sky is weeping
Even the sky is burdened by tears
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Rani Turton
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Louie Limosani 17 June 2008

A very nice poem and very sad Rani.

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Sandra Fowler 05 May 2008

Poets and rain seem to have rapport with each other.I am often inspired when I hear such tuneful tears on my old tin roof. You have penned a poem of extraordinary beauty. Your last line is very evocative. Love again, Sandra

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Roland Bastien 06 April 2008

Rain-slick roads, black and gleaming Drops on the windowpanes, streaming It seems even the sky is weeping Even the sky is burdened by tears -------- Such a beautiful sound- a real Raga

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Broken Peaces 22 January 2008

A very passionate piece it comes from a sensitive heart and a soul of warmth 10 Chris

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Shiza Khan 21 January 2008

ohh it's a very beautiful poem...so thoughtful. :)

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Frank Cannon 18 January 2008

Beautifully balanced write. The considerable weight of the last line redressing the lean toward accusation of self absorption.

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Original Unknown Girl 18 January 2008

Beautiful 3rd stanza.... 'earth's cheeks' what a gorgeous analogy. HG: -) xx

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John Nightingale 11 January 2008

You really create a great scene and an interesting final line.

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