Rain-slick roads, black and gleaming
Drops on the windowpanes, streaming
It seems even the sky is weeping
Even the sky is burdened by tears
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Poets and rain seem to have rapport with each other.I am often inspired when I hear such tuneful tears on my old tin roof. You have penned a poem of extraordinary beauty. Your last line is very evocative. Love again, Sandra
Rain-slick roads, black and gleaming Drops on the windowpanes, streaming It seems even the sky is weeping Even the sky is burdened by tears -------- Such a beautiful sound- a real Raga
A very passionate piece it comes from a sensitive heart and a soul of warmth 10 Chris
Beautifully balanced write. The considerable weight of the last line redressing the lean toward accusation of self absorption.
Beautiful 3rd stanza.... 'earth's cheeks' what a gorgeous analogy. HG: -) xx
You really create a great scene and an interesting final line.
A very nice poem and very sad Rani.