Rain Shower Comments

A poem with beautiful imageries and your have come up with a good piece showing your inside love for natural scenic and elegancies........wonderful........and rain is indeed a very attractive description which has always been worth reading..........10/10 Best Wishes Sameer

life is a celebration; defined! lovely written shruti!

i have read many poems over the years and i recommen this one as one of the best.

Beautifully written, rain is such a good subject to write about.Excellent poem. Phebe

Beautiful poem I love the rain myself. You are very talented.

Hi shruti, i like your connection with nature, nice read keep it up, i'll keep reading, regards. kelly

This is an exciting observaion of your experience of the natural. A good phrase is ....'Courting the rain ' . I liked the whole presentaion. Well done Shruti. From Fay with greetings from Cornwall U.K.

Loneliness and connection with natural elements...well done, nicely penned, beautiful imagery, congrats

This was an amazing poem. My favorite part was: 'I feel a change, a change in me As my heart lies overpowered, with this wondrous rain shower I hear a strong voice, the voice of rains And I know instantly that I am not solitary again' LOVE it! A great write- keep it up! ~Ary

As i read it, i could see the flow. I enjoy your writing. I am glad that you are willing to share these with us.

This is my favorite part: So wasting no time I jump inside And get all wet like the water all around. I count the raindrops that are falling on me, But fail to keep up, as they are so many.. Great poem Shruti

as charming as the pearly raindrops nice poem

i like the rain too. lol. excellent job.