Sunday, June 22, 2008

Rain Shower Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sun is no more, as the clouds start to show;
The heat gets cut, when the water starts to pour;
The dark hard ground is hard no more,
With the magical water seeping into its pores;
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shruti modi
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Sameer Ahmed 30 January 2009

A poem with beautiful imageries and your have come up with a good piece showing your inside love for natural scenic and elegancies........wonderful........and rain is indeed a very attractive description which has always been worth reading..........10/10 Best Wishes Sameer

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Reetessh Sabrr 04 September 2008

life is a celebration; defined! lovely written shruti!

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Blue Eyes 24 August 2008

i have read many poems over the years and i recommen this one as one of the best.

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Tanny Quin 13 August 2008

Beautifully written, rain is such a good subject to write about.Excellent poem. Phebe

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Stacey Watts 13 August 2008

Beautiful poem I love the rain myself. You are very talented.

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Kelly Houseman 13 August 2008

Hi shruti, i like your connection with nature, nice read keep it up, i'll keep reading, regards. kelly

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Fay Slimm 31 July 2008

This is an exciting observaion of your experience of the natural. A good phrase is ....'Courting the rain ' . I liked the whole presentaion. Well done Shruti. From Fay with greetings from Cornwall U.K.

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David Paigneau 30 July 2008

Loneliness and connection with natural elements...well done, nicely penned, beautiful imagery, congrats

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Aryana West 29 July 2008

This was an amazing poem. My favorite part was: 'I feel a change, a change in me As my heart lies overpowered, with this wondrous rain shower I hear a strong voice, the voice of rains And I know instantly that I am not solitary again' LOVE it! A great write- keep it up! ~Ary

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Daniel Allen 27 July 2008

As i read it, i could see the flow. I enjoy your writing. I am glad that you are willing to share these with us.

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Linda Weischedel 15 July 2008

This is my favorite part: So wasting no time I jump inside And get all wet like the water all around. I count the raindrops that are falling on me, But fail to keep up, as they are so many.. Great poem Shruti

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Chitra - 24 June 2008

as charming as the pearly raindrops nice poem

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Serenity Prayer 22 June 2008

i like the rain too. lol. excellent job.

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