Rain is -
Damp mossy wishes
Wet fragrance of memories
Unwritten poems
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This was quite good... but I cannot catch the 'She' unless you are talking about rain as she... but if we are talking about the arrival of rain perhaps images of before and after would have carried the poem further. In effect you have a disjointed list. Nice try. Work on it.
Superbly written..Keep writing.