Saturday, July 21, 2012

Rain - She Is Here Comments

Rating: 0.0

Rain is -
Damp mossy wishes
Wet fragrance of memories
Unwritten poems
...
Read full text

Indrajit Chattopadhyay
COMMENTS
Indranil Bhaduri 16 August 2012

Superbly written..Keep writing.

0 0 Reply
Michael Round 21 July 2012

This was quite good... but I cannot catch the 'She' unless you are talking about rain as she... but if we are talking about the arrival of rain perhaps images of before and after would have carried the poem further. In effect you have a disjointed list. Nice try. Work on it.

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success