Saturday, October 7, 2006

Rain Rain Rain Comments

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Rain Rain Rain,
Up above from the skies
Youu come,
As drops of joy
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Anoop Lokkur
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Tatiana Estrina 15 September 2021

Miracle lines!

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Jade Leven 29 December 2007

I liked your metaphors. It was well written and had a musical quality.

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Preeti - is here! 19 October 2006

Annop, its very beautifully written. Preets

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Alison Cassidy 07 October 2006

This is lovely, Anoop. It has a good structure, with its repetition and shape. 'Seven colours you bring together' is lovely, as is 'tiny silver crystals trickle from above.' fondly, Alison

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Anoop Lokkur

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