Rain Rain Rain,
Up above from the skies
Youu come,
As drops of joy
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I liked your metaphors. It was well written and had a musical quality.
This is lovely, Anoop. It has a good structure, with its repetition and shape. 'Seven colours you bring together' is lovely, as is 'tiny silver crystals trickle from above.' fondly, Alison
Miracle lines!