Wednesday, May 28, 2008

Rain...Rain Come Again.. Comments

Rating: 4.3

The churning sound of drizzling..
covering my mind...,
All of my day dreams...
rushing to the front yard.....
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Samanwaya Njaaneya
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Chitra - 14 July 2008

Very nicely worded, nice images

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blue 802 08 July 2008

This is a nice piece, well done

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Sarwar Chowdhury 04 July 2008

one dropp flowing... through my chest.... chuckling my feelings... wow! nice image! Lively! you are gifted no doubt!

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one drops flowing... through my chest.... very deep! !

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Deepti Agarwal 28 May 2008

what an sweet form an expression.... lovely..

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