Monday, October 8, 2007

Rain, Rain Comments

Rating: 4.8

Rain, rain, fall today,
Wash away my debts to pay,
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Shiloh Thompson
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Montana Hohensee 22 January 2008

i liked this poem very much it sparked my creative side of me dosn't happen that often anymore but you can check out my poem there good and i think you would like it

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Fane 16 October 2007

Really darling, you are good. Keep it up - this poem makes one think.

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Duncan Wyllie 10 October 2007

Wonderful poem, cleansing, sobering, love duncan X

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Ayn Timmerman 10 October 2007

Good rythym. Try to find some workshops on poetics in that backwater place you live.

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Daniel Ramirez 08 October 2007

They say god is in the rain.... rain is the base in life.....rain... is but the drops of life.. rain... will always stay... in our heart and mind... rain we need it everyday.... so true... good writing thompson..keep it up...

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