Tuesday, May 21, 2019

Rain, Rain Comments

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Rain, Rain! !
Fall in drops
On the parched earth
That is thirsty for years
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Bharati Nayak
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Glen Kappy 17 July 2019

Reading this, Bharati, I think immediately of my own prayers for rain—which I’ve been thinking about lately as this is our monsoon season and, so far, we’ve had just one significant rainfall. Perhaps you’ve read them already. The two titles that come to mind right away are “Rain Prayer” and “ Refresh, O God.” -Glen

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Rajnish Manga 01 July 2019

The poem weaves a fascinating scene of rain which is as blissful for the man as it is for the earth after a long dry spell. Thanks, Bharati ji. This is so amazing. I quote a few lines: Rain, Rain! ! / Fall in drops / On the parched earth And fill the cracks / With your gift abundance. Like blood in vessels / Fill the ponds and rivers

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 June 2019

Flow through! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anil Kumar Panda 28 May 2019

A nice poem with a sweet flow. Like to read again and again. Loved it.

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 May 2019

Reading the poem my mind goes to rains likely to enter its Indian phase at Kerala shortly. It must be a rare soul that would not like rains, I wonder. I too await with 'eager heart'.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 May 2019

Rain, Rain! ! Fall in drops On the parched earth That is thirsty for years And wait for your coming With eager heart.......touching beginning with great hope. This is really a beautiful poem on rain. Thanks for sharing.

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Bharati Nayak 25 May 2019

Thank you, Sir, for your valuable appreciative comment.I am really grateful.

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 May 2019

Hi Bharati, Lovely poem... You wrote, The scorching Summer is here in Odisha.And there is wait for Rain 's arrival. Same here in Kerala. Our well has dried up leaving my garden to perish...So we too wait for the raingod’s mercy... And the MetMan says that she is late this year. In all the years I remember, the monsoon has visited us on the 01st June. This year it is expected on the 06th...

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Bharati Nayak 24 May 2019

Thank you so much Unnikrishnan E.S.for your kind read and comment..

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Bharati, this is a wonderful poem on Rain, so beautifully penned by you. Rain is the elixir for Mother Earth. After a scorching summer, rain is welcomed with open arms by one and all.

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Bharati Nayak 22 May 2019

Thank you so much Madam Dr.Radhakrishna Menon for your lovely comment.Summer season is too hot in Odisha and it seems Summer season is gradually extending because of climate change.In some places it is above 45 degree celsius. Rain comes in the last part of June.or early July.

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Bill Cantrell 22 May 2019

Absolutely wonderful! ! Rain is full of mercy..it is a mother’s love..it is life seeking a resting place, I see all of this in your poem..it embraces the soul! ! This will no doubt be poem of the day, I’m sure of it..to my favorites!

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Bharati Nayak 22 May 2019

My hearty thanks for your wonderful review of this poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 May 2019

A wonderful piece of work that emanates from the pragmatic experiences of lives more specifically in this specific ambience! Liked the second stanza most! A poem written from heart basing upon lives in entire part of state when people are eager to get a relief from the scorching heat of the blazing sun....so well penned...10

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Bharati Nayak 22 May 2019

I must thank you profusely for your wonderful feedback on the poem and highly rating it.

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