Rain Provoked Comments

Well.., not all rains/ dare to put out flames of certain breeds. skies, clouds, mountains, rivers, blooms all have their innate fire, as we the mortals too do bear within. A different quenching substance and technique for each. Let us ponder, water often is a premonition of blazing fire. Reader to reader the telomere decides the life of appreciation and attention. God Bless. (Thank you very much for your instant review on my humble words)

Very nice now what I that unquenchable fire? A flame that water cannot contain?

A thoughtful, deeply moving and powerful poem..

Flowing in the deep verse...Neela, good! ! !

I also agree with Chris, very nice flow. A thought provoking piece. Nicely written!

Interesting write. I like the flow of this piece