Friday, November 18, 2005

Rain Pours Down Comments

Rating: 4.9

The phone call ends, and I step out of the phone box.
It's dark outside, and the cold, hard rain,
beats down on me from above.
Like arrows piercing armour,
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Steve Armstrong
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Ernestine Northover 21 November 2005

This held me, a great finale. Love Ernestine

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Vanessa Brown 18 November 2005

yet another beautiful poem - you really have talent!

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Cj Heck 18 November 2005

Solid emotion richly felt and expressed. Well done, Stephen. Warmest regards, CJ

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Linda Jenkinson 18 November 2005

good description...good poem

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Jon Lloyd 18 November 2005

Nice work, Stephen. Very moving. Jon.

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