Monday, August 5, 2019

Rain, Please Come Again Comments

Rating: 5.0

A spark of light in the darken clouds
And crack of noise that burst
The rain bless us with more joy
As we dance to celebrate
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Anjandev Roy 30 October 2023

Delightful piece..... wonderful to read....thank u, dear poetess...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 August 2023

Let the crops flourish and the greenery also....curious anticipation! Loved this beautiful poem.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 07 August 2019

A superb poem inviting and appreciating the Rain so poetically wow! Kudos for how you depict the imagery.! Pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too titled, " The hajj pilgrimage "

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 August 2019

Let the crops flourish and the greenery also The G-ds have listened to the call of the people As the flowers bloom.. bringing every thing down to God. great poem. tony

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 August 2019

okkkkk a very good prayer rain will come

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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