! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Rain Pain- Senryu! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Comments

i visualise the flooded roads and the traffic jam there...intelligent and imaginative write...10

very clever and witty....I just loved it....10

Just water and jam..........hahahahaha...........your imagination is great Mamtaji.

The clincher in this poem is the word jam; very cleverly and intelligently used, mamta!