Wednesday, November 11, 2015

Rain Overnight Comments

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Overnight rain has left the tarmac wet.
The handrail of the balustrade
Has a row of raindrops clinging on,
Not yet adrip. I count them
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Ananta Madhavan
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A. Madhavan 13 October 2018

I feel deeply grateful for comment by an appreciative reader who perhaps felt as I did and who shared the sentiment. Best wishes.

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Bharati Nayak 12 October 2018

Rain, revisit us at any season, In dribbling drizzle or showers benign, But not as deluge or cyclonic wreckage. I love your tokens under eave and rail, Nascent pearly raindrops, still adrip- - - - - - -I love the soft sweet feel of the poem.We all can relate with rain, its pearly drops, its music, but may not wish its deluge or cyclonic wreckage.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 November 2015

Rain, revisit us at any season, This definitely fantastic in this amazing sharing. Nicely penned...10

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A. Madhavan 11 November 2015

Thank you, Poet-compatriot. You are quick to look at another's contribution with fellow-feeling, though it may not be listed. I see that your own verses are adding to our stock regularly. It is a joy to follow natural changes everywhere and to seek phrases to express it. Best wishes, AM

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