Asif! I have spended the life in this yearn
That someday the rain of love
Will drizzle on me too
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May be i m lucky enough to get some Drops from you Love Rain :) Great work..10.10.10
I wish I could wave a magic wand so your dream could come true. Such yearning is extremely well expressed in another excellent poem of yours......Karin Anderson
Lovely title. We all need love to survive.10 for your gifted pen. Warm regards, Sandra
rain is a bless as well as a bliss.. that's really a great verse, i like it..
I like how you used rain in equating love, we all suffer at one time or another.
Smiled sadly and gathered Broken desires As I picked the pieces Of shattered dreams good lines. I really enjoyed this I think it is very good! ! ! great job my friend. Becca
an eloquent composition about rain and its blessing...Had a lovely read...Thanks! ! !