Monday, December 29, 2008

Rain Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Asif! I have spended the life in this yearn
That someday the rain of love
Will drizzle on me too
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Asif Baloch
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Catrina Heart 30 March 2009

an eloquent composition about rain and its blessing...Had a lovely read...Thanks! ! !

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Sunand Sharma 11 January 2009

May be i m lucky enough to get some Drops from you Love Rain :) Great work..10.10.10

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I wish I could wave a magic wand so your dream could come true. Such yearning is extremely well expressed in another excellent poem of yours......Karin Anderson

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Sandra Fowler 05 January 2009

Lovely title. We all need love to survive.10 for your gifted pen. Warm regards, Sandra

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Kite Remedy 31 December 2008

rain is a bless as well as a bliss.. that's really a great verse, i like it..

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Egi David Perdana 29 December 2008

nice poems my friends nice poems

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Joseph Poewhit 29 December 2008

I like how you used rain in equating love, we all suffer at one time or another.

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*Trusting You* 29 December 2008

Smiled sadly and gathered Broken desires As I picked the pieces Of shattered dreams good lines. I really enjoyed this I think it is very good! ! ! great job my friend. Becca

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