Saturday, September 20, 2008

Rain O Rain Comments

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Lightening sparkles in the clouds
As it pierces through the misty sky
The deafening thunder ignites the darkness
As the winds begin to cry
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Mehreen Mujeeb
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Emily Oldham 04 November 2008

wow........... a wonderful poem..... i love it. keep writing! Athena *** words will change the world ***

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 September 2008

Marhaba, nice. Well done. Love it.

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Mehreen Mujeeb

Mehreen Mujeeb

Lahore, Pakistan
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