Thursday, July 3, 2008

Rain (My First Poem) Comments

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This is my first poem. I wrote it when i was 10 years old. According to me it is not as good as 'The everlasting smile'.


Rain - the most beautiful
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Aswathi Nair K
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good one! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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premji premji 15 November 2008

poets say: rain is the love of sky toward earth 10++++++++

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Chitra - 19 July 2008

nice one, beauty lies in simplicity

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Marvin Brato 03 July 2008

I agree with your wisdom about rain as an emblem for joy.... indeed not all that turns wet is grief! A 10.

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Aswathi Nair K

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