Friday, May 18, 2007

Rain Is Falling Ii - Lightning Comments

Rating: 5.0

Rain, rain, feeling their game getting boring,
Rain, rain, together they form a new ring,
Rain, rain, hand in hand they sing,
Rain, rain, their claps bring forth lightning.
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Sandra Osborne 24 March 2008

I liked this much better. Very good, especially 'Trying to escape the rain' nice.

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Abha Sharma 22 March 2008

the effect of rain enhances here when joined with Lightening.... good one two

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Rani Turton 22 March 2008

Rain and lightning surely mess up your hair, but these lines contribute to the atmosphere of the poem.

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Cirrus Spray 12 June 2007

I can almost see Rain and Lightning conspiring behind my back to give me a bad hair day! I loved this poem! Archana

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Fred Johnson 25 May 2007

it is good...but i think it is kinda like huh? do u get what i mean?

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