Wednesday, May 11, 2016

Rain Is Comming Comments

Rating: 5.0

The rain is coming
But, they have gone
Leaving the things in a mess.
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 August 2018

A well deserved poem on corruption and poverty that I appreciate it. Thanks for sharing.

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Savita Tyagi 21 May 2016

I may have to ponder on it to know what were your thoughts behind this poem. It seems to point at many things and open to many interpretations. Early settlers do not want to share with late comers. But none can withstand the pressure too long.

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Nosheen Irfan 20 May 2016

A well-deserving 10 for this.

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Nosheen Irfan 20 May 2016

A great metaphoric write. Corruption n poverty are sad realities n a stain on mankind. Well penned.

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It was a dayrain rain go away but today...... Well written.

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 May 2016

Leaving the things in a mess! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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