The rain is coming
But, they have gone
Leaving the things in a mess.
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I may have to ponder on it to know what were your thoughts behind this poem. It seems to point at many things and open to many interpretations. Early settlers do not want to share with late comers. But none can withstand the pressure too long.
A great metaphoric write. Corruption n poverty are sad realities n a stain on mankind. Well penned.
It was a dayrain rain go away but today...... Well written.
Leaving the things in a mess! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A well deserved poem on corruption and poverty that I appreciate it. Thanks for sharing.