Tuesday, July 9, 2013

Rain In The Deep Comments

Rating: 4.3

I feel a strange wind blowing with a sharp edge, calling and beckoning on thunder, i couldn't get a glimpse, until i was gripped, fire in my veins, higher than my rage, hot ice visits in an impromptu style, a harder tour embarks, falling waters envelope the depths, planely submits to deadlier storm i succumb, as flashes of cold fire and hot rain meet my face.
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Ovison Nita
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Ovison Enita 11 July 2013

Yea indeed the sky falls!

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Dave Walker 10 July 2013

A fine poem, the sky opens and the rain falls.

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Dinesan Madathil 10 July 2013

A good poem celebrating the festivity of rain written in precise format..

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