One summer evening, the leaves dark and green
My heartfelt the music, that came from the trees
My eyes started searching, all through the green
Mild cool breeze blowing, swaying all the trees.
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Excellent writing.......Neared as I more, the sound much clear Excited was I, I thought my search over I looked here and there, the sky was clear Nothing in the air, not behind the trees, nor there over............nice stanza.
Summer rains are more soothing like the poetry in rainy days. Nicely painted with your ink.10 ±+++
A beautiful description of summer rains, though rains are always pleasant but a summer rain is something more than pleasant.
...........beautiful poem...I love rain on a summer's day ★
The soft sound of falling droplets is a welcome symphony in the peak of summer! The scent of newly wet soil is equally inviting! You have painted the evening in colours of green and crimson! The gentle breeze that accompanied the drizzle is enchanting!
Such a beautiful drop of poem like sweet drops of rain from heaven, makes the heart longing more.With rhyme, rhythm and smooth word flow this music of rain is so refreshing.- - - - - - - Welcome is the change, welcome is the rain Longing was the earth, longing was my heart The music that was felt, were the droplets of rain Still pounding upon the beat was my little heart.
To love nature and, to thank the Creator. Nice piece of work.
Beautiful.. Rain.. The most beautiful music.. The most beautiful moment.. A blessing that almost all of us cherish n enjoy.. Thanks for sharing RAIN IN SUMMER so beautifully..