Friday, September 19, 2014

Rain In Summer Comments

Rating: 5.0

The clouds rushed towards me
With thousand drops of rain.
And burst with lightning and
Thunder to wipe my sweat and pain.
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Neela Nath Das
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Geetha Jayakumar 12 October 2014

Beautiful write Neela. Very true said, rains keep us fresh and our lovely earth. Loved the thoughtful write.

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Chuy Amante 20 September 2014

Water washes this old bod cleansed perception we are god shhhhhhh

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Akhtar Jawad 20 September 2014

Rains have been the strongest device to keep the life fresh and to keep the mother earth green. A beautiful write.

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Mohammad Skati 20 September 2014

This is one of the great masterpieces of poetess Neela Nath. True feeling and pretty emotions of nature and its components. Thanks.

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Howard Mcdougal 19 September 2014

Nice use of imagery thanks for sharing

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Gajanan Mishra 19 September 2014

fresh we want to be, wonderful! thanks, Neela.

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