Rain (Haiku) Poem by Bipasha Dutt

Rain (Haiku)

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From my debut book "Fleeting Moments: haiku on nature"

a long spell of rain
has at last come to a halt
raindrops drip from leaves

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Balnarayana Bandam 14 May 2019

Dear Poet very good poem about nature raindrops drip from leaves, very true to feel and find

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Bipasha D 20 May 2019

Thank you for commenting on my poem..

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Bipasha D 29 August 2020

Thank you Glen your comment made me smile

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Glen Kappy 28 August 2020

At first, Bipasha, I had a small reaction in me to the word “halt”—it has a hard, abrupt connotation. But then I had the “aha! ” with its contrast to the subtle moving of dripping drops. Good one! -Glen

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Chinedu Dike 27 May 2019

A beautiful haiku. Thanks for sharing, Bipasha.

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Bipasha D 28 May 2019

Thank you for being so kind Chinedu :)

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Aniruddha Pathak 21 May 2019

A good haiku indeed, Bipasha Dutt.

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Bipasha D 28 May 2019

Thank you for your comment ..

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Kostas Lagos 16 May 2019

You caught the image of the end of raining perfectly!

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Bipasha D 20 May 2019

Thanks Kostas for reading and commenting...

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