I think that it will storm tonight
a change of season comes
I hear a rumble to the north
where rain gods beat their drums
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Thanks. I hear thunder as I am typing this though I wrote the poem a month ago. It looks like we are finally getting relief from the Florida drought. Rain and grace have a lot in common. We need both.
We also had rain last night after a spell of terrible heat. This poem speaks to my heart for we have harsh summers and we are often waiting for rain. As always, your poem says a lot. It's not just about rain, it's about life n fate. A profound work. A huge 10.
Thanks Nosheen. Yes, rain is a great metaphor for grace and luck.