Off the routine wooden porch here
Rooted along the front of this place
Breadcrumbs and troubles stream away
Rain marches down, steady taps, tapping over
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A superbly tailored work of art...no change there then. With shafts of wry or zany humour casually sprinkled here and there. Of course there's all the usual technical devices subtly on display, but so cunningly blended in that they're effectively invisible, so as better to achieve their ends. NIfty poem. By Tailor Bell? You bet.
Deep thought and grand imagery Tailor. Wonderful eye of the rain
Bringing the reader into the poem is something you do well Tailor, wonderful write. Melvina