Monday, March 17, 2008

Rain Front Comments

Rating: 5.0

Off the routine wooden porch here
Rooted along the front of this place
Breadcrumbs and troubles stream away
Rain marches down, steady taps, tapping over
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Tailor Bell
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Melvina Germain 18 May 2008

Bringing the reader into the poem is something you do well Tailor, wonderful write. Melvina

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Not a member No 4 01 April 2008

A superbly tailored work of art...no change there then. With shafts of wry or zany humour casually sprinkled here and there. Of course there's all the usual technical devices subtly on display, but so cunningly blended in that they're effectively invisible, so as better to achieve their ends. NIfty poem. By Tailor Bell? You bet.

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Patricia Gale 17 March 2008

Deep thought and grand imagery Tailor. Wonderful eye of the rain

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