They danced like fairies, under the lamps;
An unstringed mobile in a windless dawn;
A stream of morning consciousness swamp,
Etheral stillness, mesmerizing rhythm,
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They danced like fairies, under the lamps; An unstringed mobile in a windless dawn; A stream of morning consciousness swamp, Etheral stillness, mesmerizing rhythm, Soundless, temporary wings, under the lamps; Wonderful imagery, beautifully expressed.
Rain flies, in amber glow under the lamps...lovely imagery written about fire flies...10+++
rainflies glow in the early morning a beautiful feast to eyes....... fantastic write...
Nice poetic piece job well done