Tuesday, June 23, 2009

Rain Fly Comments

Rating: 5.0

They danced like fairies, under the lamps;
An unstringed mobile in a windless dawn;
A stream of morning consciousness swamp,
Etheral stillness, mesmerizing rhythm,
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Gillena Cox
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Eyan Desir 10 January 2010

Nice poetic piece job well done

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Trade Martin 25 June 2009

I enjoyed it Gillena. Keep up the fine work....! ! !

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 24 June 2009

Hi Gillena, this is an awesome piece indeed.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 24 June 2009

They danced like fairies, under the lamps; An unstringed mobile in a windless dawn; A stream of morning consciousness swamp, Etheral stillness, mesmerizing rhythm, Soundless, temporary wings, under the lamps; Wonderful imagery, beautifully expressed.

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Allemagne Roßmann 24 June 2009

i like the way it is represented....voted 10..

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Catrina Heart 24 June 2009

Rain flies, in amber glow under the lamps...lovely imagery written about fire flies...10+++

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rago rago 23 June 2009

rainflies glow in the early morning a beautiful feast to eyes....... fantastic write...

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