Friday, April 11, 2008

Rain Falls Gently Comments

Rating: 5.0

Rain falls gently
in my mind

memory
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Dónall Dempsey
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Empath In Flames 11 April 2008

Minds are ment to be free, If they don't have room to fly... Well, they get stuck in trees. Thank you for this relaxing read Donall.

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Flora Gillingham 11 April 2008

Wonderful metaphor. Love the tug on the line. What happens when a memory breaks free? F

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Stephanie Stamm 11 April 2008

Freedom is a wonderful feeling. I love how you wrote this...

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Scarlett Treat 11 April 2008

Uhhhnmmmmm! Delicious freedom...running, running, flying free...all the way to France...Wonderful feel of finally being off the string, and flying....free!

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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