Thursday, December 24, 2015

Rain Driven Comments

Rating: 5.0

In your backyard the cuckoo sings,
Heralding the multi color Spring,
The bright flowers sway merrily
With the gentle breeze it brings.
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Khairul Ahsan
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Valsa George 18 August 2018

The arrival of Spring is announced by the cooing of cuckoos! The song of the birds and the bright blossoms make our heart joyful filling it with love and longing! The hope of the loved one coming 'rain driven' is an interesting thought! A beautiful poem!

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Khairul Ahsan 21 May 2020

'The hope of the loved one coming 'rain driven' is an interesting thought! A beautiful poem! ' - Loved your measured appraisal in the first sentence and the generous compliment in the last. Much inspired by your comment, @Valsa George.

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Anil Kumar Panda 25 December 2015

Beautiful poetry with nice rhyming and flow. Loved it.

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Khairul Ahsan 25 December 2015

Thank you, Anil, for reading my poem and leaving your thoughtful comment here. I would appreciate if you would kindly rate the poem (out of 10) too.

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