Wednesday, August 31, 2011

Rain Dances Comments

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When rain dances steps of silver
In unseen ballet shoes
Hazy sunshine lights the fuse
Of waiting Autumn hues.
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Kevin East
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Kevin Patrick 09 December 2014

Beautiful work, it really captures the imagination, and is vivid with colours, a delight.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 31 August 2011

THE RAIN IS ONE OF MY FAVORITES AND YOUR TITLE IS VERY CATCHY YOU ARE LUCKY TO HAVE SEEN HOW THE RAIN DANCES

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 31 August 2011

THE RAIN IS ONE OF MY FAVORITES AND YOUR TITLE IS VERY CATCHY YOU ARE LUCKY TO HAVE SEEN HOW THE RAIN DANCES

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Hans Vr 31 August 2011

Very nice poem. Good rhymes and vivid images. Well done.

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