Monday, July 2, 2007

~rain Dance~ Comments

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Flowers lay waiting in sunlight's palest beam
a rainbow's their forever fading dream,
Night clouds covet as shadows gather near
amidst darkness stormy skies seem clear.
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RyuOh Kenshin 02 July 2007

very imaginative and very beautiful poem

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William Jackson 02 July 2007

Good form! Lovely poem. Creative end.

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William Jackson 02 July 2007

Good form! Lovely poem. Creative end.

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