Monday, February 23, 2015

Rain Dance Comments

Rating: 5.0

The clouds began to turn a steely gray
It looks like rain as they begun to say
As the winds tossed them around and about
A downpour soon without a shadow of a doubt
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Patricia Grantham
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Amitava Sur 13 March 2015

Rain is a vital gift of nature. So beautifully you expressed as how we see it, feel it and enjoy it.... I was delighted and went back to my childhood, you touched my heart. I still remember humming... O' my loving rain - you pour and pour on heavily - I'll float my paper boats in you And follow you with your stream ! !

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Amitava Sur 13 March 2015

Rain is a vital gift of nature. So beautifully you expressed as how we see it, feel it and enjoy it.... I was delighted and went back to my childhood, you touched my heart. I still remember humming... O' my loving rain - you pour and pour on heavily - I'll float my paper boats in you And follow you with your stream ! !

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Amitava Sur 13 March 2015

Rain is a vital gift of nature. So beautifully you expressed as how we see it, feel it enjoy it.... I was delighted and went back to my childhood, touched my heart. I still remember humming... O' my loving rain - you pour and pour on heavily - I'll float my paper boats in you And follow you with your stream ! !

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Valsa George 05 March 2015

Rain is welcomed with great joy especially after a dry spell! It rejuvenates the Earth and all the living things! Its sweet music is so refreshing! Indeed this shower of droplets from the sky is a boon sent down to man by God the Almighty! A beautiful poem Pat!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 March 2015

The cloud begins to turn and does rain and rain dances with words in poem. Really very wonderful description.

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Dave Walker 03 March 2015

Here in England we tend to get a lot of rain, every now and again it seems to dry up but for the most part we get plenty. A great poem.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 01 March 2015

Beautiful rain song full of rhyme and rhythm. I could feel the drops of rain falling creating music to the ear and delight to the eye. Thank you.

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Joseph Anderson 25 February 2015

A reverent, revealing telling of nature and God's handiwork.I am concerned about the future of the worlds water supply. A smooth flowing, well penned and worthy poem- 10

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 23 February 2015

Solid crafting from onset to close-out...Your stellar depiction of Natures needs flows mellifluously in this fine quartet of quatrains ~FjR~

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Patricia Grantham

Patricia Grantham

Moncks Corner, South Carolina
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