Saturday, June 22, 2013

Rain- -Cinquain Comments

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Rain
Pours down
Floods the places
We now curse rain
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chandra thiagarajan
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David Wood 24 June 2013

Rain is something we cannot do without yet we still moan about it.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 23 June 2013

We want rain and not floods. Nicely expressed.

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Hans Vr 23 June 2013

I love the ending. We curse the rain but then it is the rain bringing us water Beautiful cinquain

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Somanathan Iyer 22 June 2013

yes, anything in excess always bitter except money..nice write.

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