Monday, June 8, 2009

Rain By The Sea Comments

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I have seen downpour over the rooftops and trees,
I have seen rain over the mountains and valleys,
Even it rains over the vast ocean,
I guess it rains all over the world.
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Jay P Narain
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Pandian Angelina 16 June 2009

The rain and the ocean are both romantic elements in their own right and a combination of them both together definetly adds to the tempo, the colorful sail boats make a contrasting picture with the otherwise wet weather. But, I've never seen ducks and birds jumping in the ocean rain or not! A wonderful poem potraying the various aspects frame by frame gradually developing the closeness between the lovers! A wonderful short video picture, with beautiful panning effects! Angel

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Jay P Narain

Jay P Narain

Bihar, India
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