Wednesday, November 25, 2015

Rain Below Pain Above Comments

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I was dancing in the cool november rain, wishing all for sunshine. Wash away my pain.
Inching into dawns next pure prolific day, the extravagant, autumns decay.
Steam from the hot sandy road makes vision regretful, I'm dreading this long flight this eve of thanksgiving.
It was in all poets purity combined, that I was beginning to find, unity and destiny.
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 25 November 2015

Verily, a good description and imagery

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Mary Sohi 25 November 2015

love this! It's beautiful

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 November 2015

Steam from the hot sandy road makes vision regretful, Very amazing expression shared here. The title of this poem is too interesting.10

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