She's restless as a storm
Her eyes just as dark
The thunders rage within
As her screams pierce the park
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rain and flames...fine contrast. a good poem with an excellent theme.. do read my poems and comment
When the flames of life pierces our very existence then we are at our wits end in trying to figure our way out. If we would soon have enough patience then the refreshing rain will come and put the flames out. An inspiring write.