Tuesday, July 9, 2013

Rain And Flames Comments

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She's restless as a storm
Her eyes just as dark
The thunders rage within
As her screams pierce the park
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Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski
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Patricia Grantham 07 September 2013

When the flames of life pierces our very existence then we are at our wits end in trying to figure our way out. If we would soon have enough patience then the refreshing rain will come and put the flames out. An inspiring write.

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Jenie Franksay 09 July 2013

rain and flames...fine contrast. a good poem with an excellent theme.. do read my poems and comment

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Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Springfield, MA
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