Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Wednesday, September 14, 2011

Rain Again Comments

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No raining again and again
As you have made friendship with pain
Be firm and don't complain
Even if it rains. More and goes to drain
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 September 2011

Gloria Rodikis Oh that is nice! 10 hours ago · Unlike · 1 person

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 September 2011

Send message | DeleteIke I really like how each of your stanzas stand separate from each other in terms of thought, yet fit so well together as a whole. I really enjoyed reading your poem! ; -]

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 September 2011

That is gesture for good Nice stuff as energy and food What else you need as rain It is altogether nice for your complete gain

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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