Saturday, December 2, 2006

Rain Comments

Rating: 3.0

Rain is falling all around
My head lays down upon the ground
Raindrops dribble down face
As my eyes stare towards outerspace
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Dr. Kolitha Lelwala 19 January 2009

A beautiful poem. Enjoy the rain again...watching... Drops jumping from one leave to the others Making a twittering sound faling onto the ground running in ques along the telephone wire... rain is a nature's gift provoke thoughts in poetry. 10 for this fine work

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Keith Hendrickson 04 January 2009

nice work. loved the way you ended it. flows realy good too

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Jimi Doyle 02 December 2006

i like it; it's real

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