Monday, December 5, 2005

Rain Comments

Rating: 4.6

Sitting in the rain as it falls on my face,
Thinking about making love is a wondrous place.

As the rain falls down my chest,
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Judy Hill
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Peter A. Crowther 08 December 2005

I liked this one, too. It has got some sly humour that I found very amusing especially the last stanza :)

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Sally Hemingway 08 December 2005

Lovely work. I enjoyed this. Best wishes, Sal

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Judy Hill

Judy Hill

Gary, Indiana
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