Monday, August 21, 2006

Rain Comments

Rating: 4.3

You'll never see my fears again,
You'll never touch my tears again.
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Peyman Safarinejad
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S Imam 28 August 2006

I liked your poem Rain. What about 'Matter not how dread the pain' for line 4?

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