Tuesday, September 10, 2019

Rain Comments

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The grey sky will break apart and fall on this earth-
this earth will be washed away and wiped out too...
It's raining in cats and dogs.
I stand on the balcony beside a window.
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Sankhajit Bhattacharjee
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Evelyn Judy Buehler 18 January 2020

Your description of a hard, cooling, quenching rain is very vivid and enjoyable.

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Hassan Hayati 07 October 2019

every thing is alive on water, nice poem

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 September 2019

the soothing water is putting off the hot oven. O, I can't see any more- all are becoming hazy, my life too. My hands are empty, my eyes are fixed, you have a very great poetic heart and great imagination dear. make use of it and write and write. tony

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