Saturday, September 1, 2018

Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Travelling on the road heading for my home,
Rotorua it is my home from home.
Wild winds; trees across your path,
Rivers catching grass - icy roads,
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Gwendoline Rose Mardell
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Jazib Kamalvi 01 July 2019

A refined poetic imagination, Gwendoline. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Captain Cur 01 September 2018

Very descriptive, I could sense the fury of the storm and the river in your poem. Traveling on the stormy road of life. Obstacles all about, but arriving safe. Tomorrow will bring a new adventure!

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