Rain Poem by Nehaaa Guptaaa

Rain

Rating: 4.8


I dreamt about us to be like
Rain drops and clouds,
Leaves and trees,
Grass and ground,
But my dear soul you turned us like moon and sun!
You hurted me like stones hurt ground,
But i wanted you to heal me like drops heal leafs

Tuesday, August 8, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: hurt
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Hurted!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suraj Podder 15 August 2017

Ur a great poet i just love ur poetry... Love ur words.. 💓💓

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Dev Anand 11 August 2017

i wanted you to heal me liked the simily Rain drops and clouds, Leaves and trees, very nice poem. be romantic.......... forget the sadness and love again. dev

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 August 2017

Rain drops and clouds, Leaves and trees, Grass and ground, loved these comparisons which are so apt and then the contrast. In the last line the concept of healing. Wonderfully thoughtout concept and presentation. Thank you very much dear poetess. tony

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Neha Gupta 11 August 2017

Thank you so so much sir!

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Jazib Kamalvi 08 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Nehaaa. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks.

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