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On the land of red tulips, it rains
On the sad night of agony, it rains
Rain, on the holy graves of comrades
On my restless eyes, it rains
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This is rainy season in my country and I find your poem so beautiful that speaks of rain in different lands and different hearts.To my favorite list with five stars.
I missed reading it when it was the Poem of the day. But i am so happy that i read it now. Please accept my heartiest congratulations for a wonderful poem, dear Poet Hassan.......A full score!
I appreciate your kind attention, this is very encouraging to see an expert writes a comment like this on my words.
A beautiful and brilliant poem on rain. You have created magic with rain drops. It rains everywhere and is one constant factor with all objects of nature. It rains on flowers and trees, mountains and oceans and rains on man when he lives and when he dies too. Wonderful words, metaphors with a concept so unique..
On the blue ocean of my dreams, it rains/Wash my soul, rain, wash my hear....I find fascinating poetic beauty in your poetic expression! A wonderful poem dear friend....10
thanks Dr. It is my pleasure to see your comment here about my writes. it is hope making.
Beautifully crafted poem on rain that sloths in pleasure and pain that overcomes strain.
A lovely poem by Hassan, the divine downpours can wash all on this earth.
Its a gem of a poem. It really touched my heart. Warm regards, Bipasha
hassan, aware of you now from your comment on my poem, i'm reading your postings and came on this one. i guess that you too live in a place where rain is precious. i have a number of poems on rain, a few that are prayers. the one that resembles this one begins and is titled, refresh, o God. you might like it. he blessing of rain and all the good it represents be yours. -glen kappy
Exquisitely crafted poem where rain is a constant companion that brings solace in life of a man and in death. Thanks and Congrats. On the thirsty land of my chest, it rains On the blue ocean of my dreams, it rains Give me new life.. I love you rain.... On the tomb stone of mine, it rains
Thank you Ranjish, this shows your accurate attention. Yes Thirsty Land and blue ocean, you know rain falls in all places, this is the God Mercy. new life and tomb stones, Yes Death can also be a new life. I really enjoyed your brilliant and Precise attention.
CONGRATULATIONS! This is nice to see your poem here as the poem of the day. This is my revisit to this poem. Already I have given my feedback earlier. Wishing you all the best...10
I really appreciate all the encouragements made by you. I like to say, MERCY.
A rare and beautiful rain poem I have ever read on this site. Loved the lyrics as well as the rain-bathed rhythm that continues till the end. Would love to quote the lines... I love you rain, I love you On the wooden coffin, in the grave yard On my immortal tomorrow house On the tomb stone of mine, it rains Congrats for the selection as POTD. Regards. Subhas
This comment encourages me a lot , Thank you so much for being a support.
Congratulations on your poem being selected as the 'Poem of the Day'. Well done! The last four lines touched me deep!
I am Happy to see a comment like this. Thank you for the hearty attention. Tashakkor = appreciation in Farsi
A beautiful poem with a beautiful flow. Can't halt till the end. So nice. 'Scarlet my face, hopeful my heart To join the traveled pigeons Looking desperately for the moment On the blue ocean of my dreams, it rains Wash my soul, rain, wash my heart Give me new life in every single part'... is simply awesome. Congrats.
seeing a comment like this is really a new hope. It makes me more and more eager and encourages me to be more active every day. SEPAS= it means Thanks in Farsi (Persian) my mother tongue.
what a brilliant point of view, thank you, we have a saying in Farsi (my mother tongue) what you see is just the hair, what I see is the Twist of the hair Thank you for your comment.
I am sorry to answer your comment late, it was my eyes fault, I appreciate your kind attention.
a superb poem that rains down on us the true reality of being here and now? ..................well written Hassan
Thank you very much for your comment, Yes when the condition is prepared we can feel Duality in some poems. I appreciate your feelings. Thank you
This is a poem of immense depth, colour and feeling. I just love it. Thank you Hassan for a wonderful read. Geoffrey.
Wonderful timely poem to read seeing rain falling all over the place we live here! The poem flows like rain water flowing long!
oh it seems the coincidence has made the atmosphere in similar condition. any way I am encouraged by your kind attention and comment, TASHAKKOR (in Farsi means Thanks)
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7/23/2025 2:57:53 PM # 1.0.0
The train of thoughts where it rains, and how rain is your constant companion, is really wonderful to read...missed reading this earlier.