Tuesday, April 18, 2017

Rain Comments

Rating: 4.8

Rain

Pitter patter, pitter patter,
Windshield wipers slapping,
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Rebecca Lyle
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Britte Ninad 27 May 2018

rhythmic - Whispers, whispers, It is calling to me, Listen to the rhythm, Of the shadows of rain. nice 10++++

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Hassan Hayati 26 August 2017

thank you for writing this poem I learn a method of writing today.

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 April 2017

Whispers, whispers, calling to me, Listen to the rhythm, of the shadows of rain. These last lines i liked most in your beautiful poem It shows the innocence of your heart. Simply liked it very much dear poetess. Thankyou

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Rebecca Lyle 23 April 2017

I thank you so much, my friend. I have written poetry for 50 years, this is a simple little poem but I loved that part also. I am President of the Ohio chapter of the worldwide union of Poets, there is one in every state and country.

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Rebecca Lyle 23 April 2017

Thank you, my friend

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Full of feeling and refreshing as rain!

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Jazib Kamalvi 21 April 2017

A beautiful sound effect indeed. Thanks

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Rebecca Lyle 21 April 2017

Thank you so much, Jazib :)

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Rajnish Manga 19 April 2017

It has been a joy reading this poem. Brings you the delightful scene- verbatim. Thanks for sharing.

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Rebecca Lyle 21 April 2017

thank you so much, my friend!

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Khairul Ahsan 18 April 2017

Nice poem. Reminds me of my childhood days that I lived in a tin roofed house.

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Rebecca Lyle 18 April 2017

me too, thank you so much.

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Rebecca Lyle 18 April 2017

love to listen to rain, it always soothes me.

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