Monday, June 20, 2016

Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

The dragon of summer spews fire,
draining moisture with its yellow heat.
Chataks holding their heads high up
wait for rain to slake relentless thirst.
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Terry Craddock 20 June 2016

'The dragon of summer spews fire, draining moisture with its yellow heat. Chataks holding their heads high up wait for rain to slake relentless thirst. The burnt-out days offer no respite, restless nights drag on snatches of sleep' brilliant, loved the intensity of contrasts 10+++

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Ajit Das 20 June 2016

Thank you very much for liking the poem. Ajit Das

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