Rain Comments

A nice description of rains..........................

Poor farmer! /How can you claim/those fishes as yours? Beautiful poetic expression! This is absolutely a sparkling poem on rain! This wonderful poem is worth reading time and again!

written beautifully- Poor farmer! How can you claim those fishes as yours? Run oh farmer, bring your net catch as much you can../// rain, farmer, fish, water and their life greatly employ all in your poetic words

Very beautiful line...i must quote: : How can you claim those fishes as yours? Run oh farmer, bring your net catch as much you can running here and there.

Run oh farmer, bring your net catch as much you can running here and there.....great expression! My pleasure reading this beautiful poem time and again!

The poem nicely captures the 'The rain.... But a torrential fall' and the desperation of a fisherman in its wake. Centered around an insignificant looking incident, it is profound in its emotional touch. Thanks, Akham ji.

Poor farmer! How can you claim those fishes as yours? ..run o farmer........ the fish in the pond and the farmer's thought that all belongs to me and suddenly comes the rain pouring in heavily.. Fish in the pond escapes..... a very fine example you present to explain exploitation..... thank u dear poet. tony

Well done, Akham! Keep on writing.

A Very Powerful And Heartfelt Poem! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing! ! ! ! ! Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

A wonderful brief poem with a great message.! May I quote, Run! poor man/ Catch as much you can'-Absolutely fabulous.....Highly appreciated! ....10

A beautiful kind of poem. Intriguing and suspense-filled.

Very nice observation and real picture of the poor. All the best. 10+++++

We need rain, espicially it is very needful for farmers. Rain brings both happiness and sadness. Dear Akham, you have so nicely depicted this poem with both corners. Thanks for sharing.10

very nice poem. Linking of rivers will solve the water scarcity and more than abundance. Many of the rivers in south India run dry for at least 4/5 months. I saw in T, V, How people in Assam suffer my sympathies are with them.

I have seen it in Bangla Desh, during heavy rains a pond is overflowed and fish run away. A lovely observation of the poet. Great work.

excellent work, I think

A heavenly flood of tears For poverty of farmer And freedom of fish

Wonderful poem, It's a great sadness that the world is so unequal as the divide between rich and poor gets bigger.

Love reading this poem. Nice write

You have beautifully highlighted a social issue through this amazing piece of writing. Kudos.