Saturday, March 26, 2016

Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm the rain
Always come
With grains of water
And cold stab
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edria salsa
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Dr Antony Theodore 11 April 2016

I'm the rain Who you always ignored Because you would prefer The fire that will warm you........ beautiful poem . full of imagination and so much of truth and love. thank you for this poem dear poetess. tony

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Ratnakar Mandlik 26 March 2016

A beautifully conceived poem in a mood of despondency. Time to cheer-up since joy definitely replaces sorrow in the manner of night being followed by day. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Edria Salsa 26 March 2016

Thankyou :)

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