Monday, November 23, 2015

Rain Comments

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Austin Warwick
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Kim Barney 07 December 2015

Nice couplet. However, I would get rid of the period after RAIN so that it is just one sentence: Watching the rain Keeps me sane. You could also remove the capital letter from the word KEEPS or just leave it there, since many poets capitalize the first word of every line anyway. Sometimes I do that, and sometimes I don't. Keep writing.

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Austin Warwick

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