Thursday, November 12, 2015

Rain Comments

Rating: 4.6

The rain falls
I lie awake in bed, listening to the soothing lullaby
I've heard it's supposed to rain all week
It feels perfect
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Cherie Mort
COMMENTS
Leah Ross 11 April 2016

Very profound well written I love the rain

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Howard Savage 08 February 2016

Great poem that deals with integrity and awareness, and great metaphors.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 November 2015

Outside, the rain still falls, beating out a lullaby. Very amazing imagery is drawn in this interesting poem. Wisely penned really...10

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