Tuesday, July 29, 2014

Rain Comments

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A lengthy cloud was above my head.
Giving me comfort under its shade.
I thought crossing it I might reach
To the destination of life's beach.
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Neela Nath Das
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Babatunde Aremu 31 July 2014

Powerful and full of imagery. What a fantastic thought! Keep on writing

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Akhtar Jawad 30 July 2014

I thought crossing it I might reach To the destination of life's beach. These lines indicate a deep meaning in this poem. A lovely write.

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Tribhawan Kaul 29 July 2014

That is why monsoons in India is eagerly awaited. Thoughtfully composed poem.

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Tribhawan Kaul 29 July 2014

That is why monsoons in India is eagerly awaited. Thoughtfully composed poem.

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