Thursday, July 3, 2014

Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Under the crying clouds
I hold my hands
Around your waist
And whispered.....
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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 November 2017

Wonderful imaginary and imagery. Beautifully crafted on love and rain. Thanks for sharing.10

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Captain Herbert Poetry 10 August 2015

A very cool and romantic lines and words. Well done

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Beach Girl 12 July 2014

What a beautiful poem! I loved the descriptive 'crying clouds' and 'eyes brightened as stars'.

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