Saturday, May 24, 2014

Rain Comments

Rating: 4.2

Lying in bed, so snug and warm
we listen to the awesome storm.
The lightning flash, the thunder’s roll
bring trembling to the bravest soul.
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Thomas Vaughan Jones
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John Rickell 06 December 2014

I like the pulse of the writing. One can sense the rain drops.

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Matthias Pantaleon 09 October 2014

A beautiful sonnet written with charisma and humility. I love the flow and the rhyme therein. Well penned

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Matthias Pantaleon 09 October 2014

A beautiful sonnet sir. Well penned with eloquence and full of life.

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Joseph Anderson 07 July 2014

Who, but Tom could turn a thunderstorm into a harmonious melody? Just great. I am sorely missing you.Get well and come on back

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* Sunprincess * 23 June 2014

..............I love the rainy nights and listening to the thunderstorms.....wonderful poem...

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